I have five favorite places in Kumamoto. Today, I am going to write about my five favorite places. My favorite places are Mt. Hanaoka, my grand faather’s house, Christmas season’s downtown, festivals and "kikuchijo" in Kikuka where we can see sunrise at New Year Day. These have some common points. One of these is at night, and other common points are quiet places, bustling and nature. I like there places so much, so I can’t choose only one.
One of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.
I have loved my grand father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but a lot of nature made me become composed. I can more set my mind than somewhere. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
I like festival that is held my hometown called “yamagatourou” It is held in Yamaga every summer. At there, we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
I'm going to write about my especially favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend at “kikuchijo” in Kikuka. We can't sleep enough, because we must go “kikuchijo” early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is not famous, so only local people know there!
These are my five favorite places. I am glad if everyone who read my essay visit my favorite places.
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2009/10/18
Draft essay: My 5 favorite places (Revision)
I have 5 favorite places in Kumamoto. Today, I am going to write abut my 5 favorite places
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people like lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me. I go there one day for two weeks. I don’t know its address, but it is near the Kumamoto station.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there! I think, it is the best place to see sunset in Kumamoto.
This is my 5 favorite places. I am glad if everyone who read my essay visit my favorite places.
(361 words) Total:3957
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people like lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me. I go there one day for two weeks. I don’t know its address, but it is near the Kumamoto station.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there! I think, it is the best place to see sunset in Kumamoto.
This is my 5 favorite places. I am glad if everyone who read my essay visit my favorite places.
(361 words) Total:3957
2009/10/08
Draft essay 2-01a: my special favorite places
I have 5 favorite places in Kumamoto. Today, I am going to write abut my 5 favorite places.
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there!
(310 words + 20 words + 37 words)
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there!
(310 words + 20 words + 37 words)
2009/10/07
Favorite Place(s): outline
Hanaoka mountain
beautiful night view
a quiet night
stars
moon
My grandfather's house
a lot of trees
beautiful stream
blue sky
Downtown
glitter street
Christmas
festival
fire works
kakigori
bustling
sunrise
New Year's day
early morning
beautiful night view
a quiet night
stars
moon
My grandfather's house
a lot of trees
beautiful stream
blue sky
Downtown
glitter street
Christmas
festival
fire works
kakigori
bustling
sunrise
New Year's day
early morning
Favorite Place(s): brainstorms
beautiful night view
a quiet night
a lot of trees
beautiful stream
stars
blue sky
moon
glitter street
festival
sunrise
a quiet night
a lot of trees
beautiful stream
stars
blue sky
moon
glitter street
festival
sunrise
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