I’m going to write about my learning languages story. I’m going to write about English and French. I have learned English about for 10 years. Last year, I attended French classes.
When I was an elementary school student, I heard English the first time. I played game on the English music about once a week or once a month. It is called ALT. When I was a junior high school student and high school student, I learned English at the class. It was not games such as elementary school. Now, I also learn English at KGU. In the future, I would like to talk with foreigner smoothly and I want to watch films in English without subtitles.
First, however, I’d like to tell about my future. I have had dreams for a long time. If I marry, I would like to go abroad for honeymoon with my husband. At there, I want to talk with foreigner in languages other them smoothly and want to understand them. One of my dreams is to watch foreign films without subtitle. I like films from other countries very much, so I want to hear themselves voice. I think, almost everyone thought “foreign films have subtitles, so you can hear themselves voice!” It is exactly, but when I read subtitles, I can’t watch pictures. Don’t you think so? That why I want to watch films from other countries without subtitles.
Next, I’m going to write about when I how I first studied English. When I was an elementary school student, I heard English the first time. I played game on the English music about once a week or once a month. It is called “ALT” I don’t remember that days clearly.
When I was a junior high school student and high school student, I learned English at the classes. It was not games such as elementary school. The more I studied English, I like it the more. When I was 15 years old, I visited Australia for two weeks with my friend as a delegate of my junior school. There, I had experienced home stay only myself, take a train only myself, went to shopping with my host family, met an Australian ex-president, and so on. Back Kumamoto, I always remember these special days. That experience made me like English more than before.
I’m going to write about now. Of course I study English almost everyday at KGU. I was surprised at first last year, because teacher is foreigner. I was worried about whether I can understand what they say. However, I think, I could make progress more than before. At eibeigakka KGU, I attend listening class, speaking class, writing class, and reading class. Especially, I’m doing my best for listening and speaking. I can’t listen and speak well, so I would like to listen and speak English better. At the writing class, we have a lot of homework, but it made me better to write English.
When I was freshman, I studied French, but I was not interested in French. However, in addition to English, we must take another foreign language class. French was too difficult for me. I studied hard, but I couldn’t understand French. Now, I think it was good experience for me, because If I hadn’t taken a French class, I didn’t study another foreign language.
All in all, I’m a lucky girl, because If I had not visited Australia, I might not study English now. I think I have a lot of things to do now. I’m going to do my best, and I don’t want to forget my original intention. Then, I believe dreams come true in the future!
(610 words) Total: 9717
2009/11/30
essay 2-03a: My Story of learning English
This time, I’m going to write about my learning languages story. I’m going to write about English. When I was an elementary school student, I heard English the first time. I played game on the English music about once a week or once a month. It is called “ALT” When I was a junior high school student and high school student, I learned English at the class. It was not games such as elementary school. And now, I also learn English at KGU. In the future, I would like to talk with foreigner smoothly and I want to watch foreign films without subtitles.
At first, I’m going to write about future in detail. I have had dreams for a long time. If I marry with some one in the future, I would like to go abroad to honeymoon with my husband. At there, I want to talk with foreigner smoothly and want to understand them. One of my dreams is to watch foreign films without subtitle. I like foreign films very much, so I want to hear themselves voice. I think, almost everyone thought “foreign films have subtitles, so you can hear themselves voice!” It is exactly, but when I read subtitles, I can’t watch pictures. Don’t you think so? That is the reason why I want to watch foreign films without subtitles.
Next, I’m going to write about my past days. When I was an elementary school student, I heard English the first time. I played game on the English music about once a week or once a month. It is called “ALT” I don’t remember that days clearly. When I was a junior high school student and high school student, I learned English at the classes. It was not games such as elementary school. The more I studied English, I like it more than before. When I was 15 years old, I visited Australia for two weeks with my friend as a delegate of my junior school. At there, I experienced home stay only myself, take a train only myself, went to shopping with my host family, met Australian ex-president, and so on. After I came back Kumamoto, I always remember these special days. That experience made me like English more than before.
Finally, I’m going to write about now. Of course I study English almost everyday at KGU. At first, I was surprised last year, because teacher is foreigner. I was worried about myself. However, I think, I could make progress more than before. At eibeigakka KGU, I attend listening class, speaking class, writing class, and reading class. Especially, I’m doing my best for listening and speaking. I can’t listen and speak well, so I would like to listen and speak English better. At the writing class, we have a lot of homework, but, it made me better to write English. I think so.
Now I think, I’m a lucky girl, because If I had not visited Australia, I might not study English now. I think, I have a lot of things to do now. I’m going to do my best, and I don’t want to forget my original intention. Then, I believe dreams come true in the future!
(532 words) Total: 8670
At first, I’m going to write about future in detail. I have had dreams for a long time. If I marry with some one in the future, I would like to go abroad to honeymoon with my husband. At there, I want to talk with foreigner smoothly and want to understand them. One of my dreams is to watch foreign films without subtitle. I like foreign films very much, so I want to hear themselves voice. I think, almost everyone thought “foreign films have subtitles, so you can hear themselves voice!” It is exactly, but when I read subtitles, I can’t watch pictures. Don’t you think so? That is the reason why I want to watch foreign films without subtitles.
Next, I’m going to write about my past days. When I was an elementary school student, I heard English the first time. I played game on the English music about once a week or once a month. It is called “ALT” I don’t remember that days clearly. When I was a junior high school student and high school student, I learned English at the classes. It was not games such as elementary school. The more I studied English, I like it more than before. When I was 15 years old, I visited Australia for two weeks with my friend as a delegate of my junior school. At there, I experienced home stay only myself, take a train only myself, went to shopping with my host family, met Australian ex-president, and so on. After I came back Kumamoto, I always remember these special days. That experience made me like English more than before.
Finally, I’m going to write about now. Of course I study English almost everyday at KGU. At first, I was surprised last year, because teacher is foreigner. I was worried about myself. However, I think, I could make progress more than before. At eibeigakka KGU, I attend listening class, speaking class, writing class, and reading class. Especially, I’m doing my best for listening and speaking. I can’t listen and speak well, so I would like to listen and speak English better. At the writing class, we have a lot of homework, but, it made me better to write English. I think so.
Now I think, I’m a lucky girl, because If I had not visited Australia, I might not study English now. I think, I have a lot of things to do now. I’m going to do my best, and I don’t want to forget my original intention. Then, I believe dreams come true in the future!
(532 words) Total: 8670
2009/11/12
Essay 2-02b: American music and culture
This time, I watched a lot of websites about America. I spent long time to find good website. I am very interested in America. Especially, I'm interested in Hollywood, music, and culture. I think, America has unique culture. I found website about them. I was so happy when I could find it, because the websites are easy to understand for me. First, I am going to write about Hollywood. Next, I'm going to write about Rock and Roll of American music. Third, I am going to write about Yellow Ribbon of American culture.
I have been interested in Hollywood since I was junior high school student. At first, I thought just "Actress and actor are so cool and beautiful!" but I watched I lot of movies, and then, I'm interested in Hollywood more than before. I have known that Hollywood is the movie capital of the world. However, after I read this website, I realized that I had a lot of things I have not known about Hollywood. Foe example, "Hollywood films are shown in colleges and in treatment centers as they depict people with mental illness and substance abuse." and so on. If I have not watched this website, I can't know a lot of things. I'm glad to find it and I can know about Hollywood more than before.
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/hollywood.htm
I want to know more about Rock and Roll. Do you know this type of music? I have heard this name, but I don’t answer if someone asks me “What kind of music?” so, I want to know about this music. Rock and roll was the great synthesis of black and white American musical traditions. It began 1950’s. It is easy to read for us. I recommend you watch this website.
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/rockroll.htm
I have known it Yellow Ribbon a little, but I want to know more, so I watched website about it. Display of a Yellow Ribbon is a sign of loyalty to family, friends or loved ones who are welcome home. Have you known it? I have never known it. This website has back ground of Yellow Ribbon. I was surprised a little, because it is related to 19th Century Civil War Song. I have never known it. There are not culture like that in Japan as far as I know. I think, America has great culture. It gave me a chance to learn. I think this is great website, because we can know what we want to know, and we can learn back ground too! I recommend you it.
http://www.americanfamilytraditions.com/yellow_ribbon.htm
After I read them, I feel happy, because I can get information what I want to know. I like America more than before. I want to know American unique culture more like Yellow Ribbon.
(458 words) Total: 7468
I have been interested in Hollywood since I was junior high school student. At first, I thought just "Actress and actor are so cool and beautiful!" but I watched I lot of movies, and then, I'm interested in Hollywood more than before. I have known that Hollywood is the movie capital of the world. However, after I read this website, I realized that I had a lot of things I have not known about Hollywood. Foe example, "Hollywood films are shown in colleges and in treatment centers as they depict people with mental illness and substance abuse." and so on. If I have not watched this website, I can't know a lot of things. I'm glad to find it and I can know about Hollywood more than before.
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/hollywood.htm
I want to know more about Rock and Roll. Do you know this type of music? I have heard this name, but I don’t answer if someone asks me “What kind of music?” so, I want to know about this music. Rock and roll was the great synthesis of black and white American musical traditions. It began 1950’s. It is easy to read for us. I recommend you watch this website.
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/rockroll.htm
I have known it Yellow Ribbon a little, but I want to know more, so I watched website about it. Display of a Yellow Ribbon is a sign of loyalty to family, friends or loved ones who are welcome home. Have you known it? I have never known it. This website has back ground of Yellow Ribbon. I was surprised a little, because it is related to 19th Century Civil War Song. I have never known it. There are not culture like that in Japan as far as I know. I think, America has great culture. It gave me a chance to learn. I think this is great website, because we can know what we want to know, and we can learn back ground too! I recommend you it.
http://www.americanfamilytraditions.com/yellow_ribbon.htm
After I read them, I feel happy, because I can get information what I want to know. I like America more than before. I want to know American unique culture more like Yellow Ribbon.
(458 words) Total: 7468
2009/10/29
Essay 2-02a: American culture
This time, I watched a lot of websites about American culture. I spent long time to find good website. I am very interested in America. Especially, I'm interested in Hollywood, music, and culture what is unique. I found website about them. I was so happy when I could find it.
First, I am going to about Hollywood. I have been interested in Hollywood since I was junior high school student. At first, I thought just "Actress and actor are so cool and beautifil!" but I watched I lot of movies, and then, I am interested in Hollywood more than before. I have known that Hollywood is the movie capital of the world. However, after I read this website, I realized that I have a lot of things I have not known about Hollywood. Foe example, "Hollywood films are shown in colleges and in treatment centers as they depict people with mental illness and substance abuse." and so on. If I have not watched this website, I can't know a lot of things. I'm glad to find it and I can know about Hollywood more than before.
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/hollywood.htm
Next, I'm going to write about Rock and Roll of American music. Do you know this type of music? I have heard this name, but I don’t answer if someone asks me “What kind of music?” so, I want to know about this music. Rock and roll was the great synthesis of black and white American musical traditions. It began 1950’s. It is easy to read for us. I recommend you watch this website.
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/rockroll.htm
Third, I am going to write about Yellow Ribbon of American culture. I have known it Yellow Ribbon a little, but I want to know more, so I watched website about it. Display of a Yellow Ribbon is a sign of loyalty to family, friends or loved ones who are welcome home. Have you known it? I have never known it. This website has back ground of Yellow Ribbon. I was surprised a little, because it is related to 19th Century Civil War Song. It gave me a chance to learn. I think this is great website, because we can know what we want to know, and we can learn back ground too! I recommend you it.
http://www.americanfamilytraditions.com/yellow_ribbon.htm
All the page of websites are easy to read and understand for me. After I read them, I feel happy, because I can get information what I want to know. I like America more than before.
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American culture
Hollywood
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/hollywood.htm
It is little difficult for me to read, but I'm interested in Hollywood.
Rock and Roll
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/rockroll.htm
I have heard this music, but I have not known enough.
Tie a Yellow Ribbon
http://www.americanfamilytraditions.com/yellow_ribbon.htm
We don't have such as culture, so I want to know it.
(44 words)
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/hollywood.htm
It is little difficult for me to read, but I'm interested in Hollywood.
Rock and Roll
http://www.lifeintheusa.com/culture/rockroll.htm
I have heard this music, but I have not known enough.
Tie a Yellow Ribbon
http://www.americanfamilytraditions.com/yellow_ribbon.htm
We don't have such as culture, so I want to know it.
(44 words)
2009/10/21
Essays 2-01b: My special favorite placese
I have five favorite places in Kumamoto. Today, I am going to write about my five favorite places. My favorite places are Mt. Hanaoka, my grand faather’s house, Christmas season’s downtown, festivals and "kikuchijo" in Kikuka where we can see sunrise at New Year Day. These have some common points. One of these is at night, and other common points are quiet places, bustling and nature. I like there places so much, so I can’t choose only one.
One of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.
I have loved my grand father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but a lot of nature made me become composed. I can more set my mind than somewhere. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
I like festival that is held my hometown called “yamagatourou” It is held in Yamaga every summer. At there, we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
I'm going to write about my especially favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend at “kikuchijo” in Kikuka. We can't sleep enough, because we must go “kikuchijo” early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is not famous, so only local people know there!
These are my five favorite places. I am glad if everyone who read my essay visit my favorite places.
(403 words) Total: 4808
One of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.
I have loved my grand father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but a lot of nature made me become composed. I can more set my mind than somewhere. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
I like festival that is held my hometown called “yamagatourou” It is held in Yamaga every summer. At there, we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
I'm going to write about my especially favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend at “kikuchijo” in Kikuka. We can't sleep enough, because we must go “kikuchijo” early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is not famous, so only local people know there!
These are my five favorite places. I am glad if everyone who read my essay visit my favorite places.
(403 words) Total: 4808
2009/10/18
Draft essay: My 5 favorite places (Revision)
I have 5 favorite places in Kumamoto. Today, I am going to write abut my 5 favorite places
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people like lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me. I go there one day for two weeks. I don’t know its address, but it is near the Kumamoto station.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there! I think, it is the best place to see sunset in Kumamoto.
This is my 5 favorite places. I am glad if everyone who read my essay visit my favorite places.
(361 words) Total:3957
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people like lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me. I go there one day for two weeks. I don’t know its address, but it is near the Kumamoto station.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there! I think, it is the best place to see sunset in Kumamoto.
This is my 5 favorite places. I am glad if everyone who read my essay visit my favorite places.
(361 words) Total:3957
2009/10/08
Draft essay 2-01a: my special favorite places
I have 5 favorite places in Kumamoto. Today, I am going to write abut my 5 favorite places.
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there!
(310 words + 20 words + 37 words)
At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.
Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.
However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.
Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.
At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there!
(310 words + 20 words + 37 words)
2009/07/14
Essays 1-03b: Lilo & Stitch
I watched the movie “Lilo & Stitch”. Lilo and her sister don’t have their parents. Stitch doesn’t have his parents, because he is a robot. I thought relationship of family and friends. So I’m going to write about relationship of family and friends.
At first, I write about relationship of family from movie. Lilo and Nani are sisters. They live only them, because their parents died. Nani bought a dog to Lilo, but it is not a dog. It is a robot made by scientist. This is “Stitch”, and Stitch doesn’t have his family because he is a robot. Lilo and Stitch became like a true family.
Next, I write about relationship of family from my real life. I have a older sister too. My sister has been care of me since I was a child. I have parents. I think, if my parents died like Lilo’s parents, I can’t live. If Stitch comes to me, I think I am surprised at it, but I wish I can have just one look at it.
Next, I write about relationship of friends from movie. Lilo didn’t have friends, because she is a rough. So, she was always lonely. Her sister Nani worries her, and she bought Stitch to Lilo. At first, Lilo and Stitch are not close friends. One day, Lilo was bullied by children. Then, Stitch barked them and help Lilo. After that, they became good friends each other.
Finally, I write about relationship of friends from my real life. I have a lot of friends who are Local friends, my high school days friends, and KGU friends. I think friends are my treasure. Whenever I am sad, my friends make me smile and happy, and whenever I am happy, my friends are pleased with me. I have been supported by my friends. Of course, I have quarreled with my friends a lot, but I think, it is proof of we trust each other.
I think, family and friends are my treasure. I have been with my family since I was born. Whenever I feel sad, or happy, always my family support me, and make me fun. Of course, my friends too. I can’t enjoy my life without my family and my friends.
(373 words)
At first, I write about relationship of family from movie. Lilo and Nani are sisters. They live only them, because their parents died. Nani bought a dog to Lilo, but it is not a dog. It is a robot made by scientist. This is “Stitch”, and Stitch doesn’t have his family because he is a robot. Lilo and Stitch became like a true family.
Next, I write about relationship of family from my real life. I have a older sister too. My sister has been care of me since I was a child. I have parents. I think, if my parents died like Lilo’s parents, I can’t live. If Stitch comes to me, I think I am surprised at it, but I wish I can have just one look at it.
Next, I write about relationship of friends from movie. Lilo didn’t have friends, because she is a rough. So, she was always lonely. Her sister Nani worries her, and she bought Stitch to Lilo. At first, Lilo and Stitch are not close friends. One day, Lilo was bullied by children. Then, Stitch barked them and help Lilo. After that, they became good friends each other.
Finally, I write about relationship of friends from my real life. I have a lot of friends who are Local friends, my high school days friends, and KGU friends. I think friends are my treasure. Whenever I am sad, my friends make me smile and happy, and whenever I am happy, my friends are pleased with me. I have been supported by my friends. Of course, I have quarreled with my friends a lot, but I think, it is proof of we trust each other.
I think, family and friends are my treasure. I have been with my family since I was born. Whenever I feel sad, or happy, always my family support me, and make me fun. Of course, my friends too. I can’t enjoy my life without my family and my friends.
(373 words)
2009/06/30
Essay 1-03a: Lilo & Stitch
I watched the movie “Lilo & Stitch”. I thought relationship of family and friends, so I’m going to write about relationship of family and friends.
At first, I write about relationship of family from movie. Lilo and Nani are sisters. They live only them, because their parents died. Nani bought a dog to Lilo, but it is not a dog. It is a robot made by scientist. This is “Stitch”, and Stitch doesn’t have his family because he is a robot. Lilo and Stitch became like a true family.
Next, I write about relationship of family from my real life. I have a older sister too. My sister has been care of me since I was a child. I have parents. I think, if my parents died like Lilo’s parents, I can’t live. If Stitch comes to me, I think I am surprised at it, but I wish I can have just one look at it.
Next, I write about relationship of friends from movie. Lilo didn’t have friends, because she is a rough. So, she was always lonely. Her sister Nani worries her, and she bought Stitch to Lilo. At first, Lilo and Stitch are not close friends. One day, Lilo was bullied by children. Then, Stitch barked them and help Lilo. After that, they became good friends each other.
Next, I write about relationship of friends from my real life. I have a lot of friends who are Local friends, my high school days friends, and KGU friends. I think friends are my treasure. Whenever I am sad, my friends make me smile and happy, and whenever I am happy, my friends are pleased with me. I have been supported by my friends. Of course, I have quarreled with my friends a lot, but I think, it is proof of we trust each other.
I think, family and friends are my treasure. I cant enjoy my life without my family and my friends.
(325 words) Total: 7496 words
At first, I write about relationship of family from movie. Lilo and Nani are sisters. They live only them, because their parents died. Nani bought a dog to Lilo, but it is not a dog. It is a robot made by scientist. This is “Stitch”, and Stitch doesn’t have his family because he is a robot. Lilo and Stitch became like a true family.
Next, I write about relationship of family from my real life. I have a older sister too. My sister has been care of me since I was a child. I have parents. I think, if my parents died like Lilo’s parents, I can’t live. If Stitch comes to me, I think I am surprised at it, but I wish I can have just one look at it.
Next, I write about relationship of friends from movie. Lilo didn’t have friends, because she is a rough. So, she was always lonely. Her sister Nani worries her, and she bought Stitch to Lilo. At first, Lilo and Stitch are not close friends. One day, Lilo was bullied by children. Then, Stitch barked them and help Lilo. After that, they became good friends each other.
Next, I write about relationship of friends from my real life. I have a lot of friends who are Local friends, my high school days friends, and KGU friends. I think friends are my treasure. Whenever I am sad, my friends make me smile and happy, and whenever I am happy, my friends are pleased with me. I have been supported by my friends. Of course, I have quarreled with my friends a lot, but I think, it is proof of we trust each other.
I think, family and friends are my treasure. I cant enjoy my life without my family and my friends.
(325 words) Total: 7496 words
Essay 1-02b: University life
There are a lot of students in KGU, and they came from several area. Many students live in Kumamoto city, some students don’t live in Kumamoto city. For example, Aso, Minamata, Uto, Amakusa, Yamaga and so on. Then, students come to KGU several way. Of course students who live in far couldn't come on foot or by bicycle. Also, students who live near KGU don't have to come by a car, buses, and train. I'm going to write about how everyone come to school.
At first, I write about myself. I live in Yamaga. I spend about an hour to come to KGU by car. If I come to KGU by bus, I must change on the way, and it takes more time. When I drive to KGU and go home, I always listen to music, otherwise I become sleepy.
I come to school by my car, some people who live far come to KGU by other way. For example, train and bus. I want to go by train because it is cheaper than car, but there are not trains in my town. Some students whose home is too far KGU live alone near KGU. I wanted to live alone before, but I can't live alone now, because I think that I will miss my family.
Many students who live in near KGU come to KGU on foot or by bicycle. Students who live not so far come to KGU by a motor bike, or train, or bus. Students who live far come to KGU by car. Some of them use train and car or train and bus or car and bus. A lot of student can't come to KGU if public transportation stops.
A lot of students come to KGU by car, train and bus. I think, a lot of students hurry every morning. If they couldn't catch the train and bus, they are late for or miss the classes. When students who come by car are caught in a traffic jam, they can't attend classes on time. I envy students who live near KGU.
(346 words) Total: 7171 words
At first, I write about myself. I live in Yamaga. I spend about an hour to come to KGU by car. If I come to KGU by bus, I must change on the way, and it takes more time. When I drive to KGU and go home, I always listen to music, otherwise I become sleepy.
I come to school by my car, some people who live far come to KGU by other way. For example, train and bus. I want to go by train because it is cheaper than car, but there are not trains in my town. Some students whose home is too far KGU live alone near KGU. I wanted to live alone before, but I can't live alone now, because I think that I will miss my family.
Many students who live in near KGU come to KGU on foot or by bicycle. Students who live not so far come to KGU by a motor bike, or train, or bus. Students who live far come to KGU by car. Some of them use train and car or train and bus or car and bus. A lot of student can't come to KGU if public transportation stops.
A lot of students come to KGU by car, train and bus. I think, a lot of students hurry every morning. If they couldn't catch the train and bus, they are late for or miss the classes. When students who come by car are caught in a traffic jam, they can't attend classes on time. I envy students who live near KGU.
(346 words) Total: 7171 words
2009/05/29
Essay 1-02a: University life
There are a lot of students in KGU, and they came from each area. Almost students live in Kumamoto city, some students live in except Kumamoto city. For example, Aso, Minamata, Uto, Amakusa, Yamaga and so on. Then, students come to KGU each way. Of course students who live in far couldn't come on foot or by bicycle. Also, students who live near KGU don't have to come by a car, buses, and train. Then, I'm going to write about how to come to school everyone.
At first, I write about myself. I live in Yamaga, except Kumamoto city. I spend about an hour to go to KGU by car. If I go to KGU by bus, I must change on the way, and it takes more time. When I drive to KGU and go home, I always listen to music, because I become sleepy.
However I come to school by my car, some people who live more far come to KGU by other way. For example, train and bus. I want to go by train because it is cheaper than car, but there are not trains in my town. Then, some students that there home is too far KGU live alone near KGU. I wanted to live alone before, but I can't live alone now, because I think that I will miss my family.
Almost students who live in near KGU come to KGU on foot or by bicycle. Then, students who live a little far come to KGU by a motor bike or train or bus. Students who live more far come to KGU by car. Some of them use train and car or train and bus or car and bus. Almost student can't come to KGU if public transportation stops or abolition.
A lot of students come to KGU by car, train and bus. I think, almost student hurry in every morning. If they couldn't catch the train and bus, they are late for classes or miss the classes. Then, when students who come by car are caught in a traffic jam, they can't attend classes on time. I envied students who live near KGU.
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At first, I write about myself. I live in Yamaga, except Kumamoto city. I spend about an hour to go to KGU by car. If I go to KGU by bus, I must change on the way, and it takes more time. When I drive to KGU and go home, I always listen to music, because I become sleepy.
However I come to school by my car, some people who live more far come to KGU by other way. For example, train and bus. I want to go by train because it is cheaper than car, but there are not trains in my town. Then, some students that there home is too far KGU live alone near KGU. I wanted to live alone before, but I can't live alone now, because I think that I will miss my family.
Almost students who live in near KGU come to KGU on foot or by bicycle. Then, students who live a little far come to KGU by a motor bike or train or bus. Students who live more far come to KGU by car. Some of them use train and car or train and bus or car and bus. Almost student can't come to KGU if public transportation stops or abolition.
A lot of students come to KGU by car, train and bus. I think, almost student hurry in every morning. If they couldn't catch the train and bus, they are late for classes or miss the classes. Then, when students who come by car are caught in a traffic jam, they can't attend classes on time. I envied students who live near KGU.
(358words)
2009/04/12
Essay 1-01b: Dear my host family (Rewrite)
Dear my host family
Hello. My name is Yurina. I’m a KGU student. I have six people in my family, my father, my mother, my grandmother, my sister, my brother and me. My family is fun. I love my family.
My favorite sport is basketball. I have played it for six years. Do you like playing basketball? I want to play it with you. I like watching baseball but, I can’t play it well. If I were a boy, I want to play baseball.
My hobby is shopping. I’m interested in fashion, cosmetics and accessories. Do you like shopping? I want to know what types of fashion do you like. I’m interested in Australian fashion. Would you go shopping with me?
Perhaps I shouldn’t ask, but do you eat boiled rice? I like boiled rice very much. I eat it every day. I also like spaghetti, bread, meat and so on. I like eating very much. So, I’m looking forward to eating Australian foods.
By the way, have you held a koala? I want to hold a koala because it is so cute. I like animals very much. If I can’t hold it, I would like to look closer and take pictures.
I have a dream. It is to talk with a foreigner smoothly, and I want to watch a foreign film without subtitles It is for that purpose that I want study English. Do you have a dream? I want to know your dreams. Shall we talk each other about our dreams in English? I’m looking forward to see you.
Sincerely,
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Hello. My name is Yurina. I’m a KGU student. I have six people in my family, my father, my mother, my grandmother, my sister, my brother and me. My family is fun. I love my family.
My favorite sport is basketball. I have played it for six years. Do you like playing basketball? I want to play it with you. I like watching baseball but, I can’t play it well. If I were a boy, I want to play baseball.
My hobby is shopping. I’m interested in fashion, cosmetics and accessories. Do you like shopping? I want to know what types of fashion do you like. I’m interested in Australian fashion. Would you go shopping with me?
Perhaps I shouldn’t ask, but do you eat boiled rice? I like boiled rice very much. I eat it every day. I also like spaghetti, bread, meat and so on. I like eating very much. So, I’m looking forward to eating Australian foods.
By the way, have you held a koala? I want to hold a koala because it is so cute. I like animals very much. If I can’t hold it, I would like to look closer and take pictures.
I have a dream. It is to talk with a foreigner smoothly, and I want to watch a foreign film without subtitles It is for that purpose that I want study English. Do you have a dream? I want to know your dreams. Shall we talk each other about our dreams in English? I’m looking forward to see you.
Sincerely,
(262words)
2009/04/10
Essay 1-01a: Dear my host family
Dear my host family
Hello. My name is Yurina. I’m a Kumamoto Gakuenn University student. I have six people in my family, my father, my mother, my grandmother, my sister, my brother and me. My family is fun. I love my family.
My favorite sports are basketball. I have played it for six years. Do you like playing basketball? I want to play it with you. I like watching baseball but, I can’t play it well. If I were a boy, I want to play baseball.
My hobby is shopping. I’m interested in fashion, cosmetics and accessories. Do you like shopping? I want to know what types of fashion do you like. I’m interested in Australian fashion. Would you go shopping with me?
It is hardly to ask, but do you eat boiled rice? I like boiled rice very much. I eat it every day. I also like spaghetti, bread, meat and so on. I like eating very much. So, I’m looking forward to eating Australian foods.
By the way, have you held a koala? I want to hold a koala because it is so cute. I like animals very much. If I can’t hold it, I want to look closer and take pictures.
I have a dream. It is to talk with a foreigner smoothly, and I want to watch a foreign film without subtitles It is for that purpose that I want study English. Do you have a dream? I want to know your dreams. Shall we talk each other about our dreams in English? I’m looking forward to see you.
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Hello. My name is Yurina. I’m a Kumamoto Gakuenn University student. I have six people in my family, my father, my mother, my grandmother, my sister, my brother and me. My family is fun. I love my family.
My favorite sports are basketball. I have played it for six years. Do you like playing basketball? I want to play it with you. I like watching baseball but, I can’t play it well. If I were a boy, I want to play baseball.
My hobby is shopping. I’m interested in fashion, cosmetics and accessories. Do you like shopping? I want to know what types of fashion do you like. I’m interested in Australian fashion. Would you go shopping with me?
It is hardly to ask, but do you eat boiled rice? I like boiled rice very much. I eat it every day. I also like spaghetti, bread, meat and so on. I like eating very much. So, I’m looking forward to eating Australian foods.
By the way, have you held a koala? I want to hold a koala because it is so cute. I like animals very much. If I can’t hold it, I want to look closer and take pictures.
I have a dream. It is to talk with a foreigner smoothly, and I want to watch a foreign film without subtitles It is for that purpose that I want study English. Do you have a dream? I want to know your dreams. Shall we talk each other about our dreams in English? I’m looking forward to see you.
(264words)
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