BR 2-04: Victorian Adventure

At last, I'm going to write about "Victorian Adventure" This story is longer than two books.

Biff and Chip had been to London with Gran. They had some pictures which they into a scrapbook. They wanted to take the book to school. Gran come into Biff's room to look at the children's scrapbook, and she is pleased. Suddenly, the magic took the children into the kittle house, but did it take Gran? The magic key took them London. At there, they met a boy called Vicky. He said "I'm hungry. I know where we can get some money. Follow me!" They follow him down winding streets. At last, they come to a blacksmith's. He was looking at a horse's hoof. He said "I'll give you a penny to pump the bellows" they pumped and pumped until the fire glowed hot. It was hard work, and they are more hungry. Vicky take them baker shop. The bread is hot and smelled good.

Next, Vicky took them to a street with a high wall. A boy called Jack was waiting there. They all climbed on the wall. They could see Buckingham Place. There are 3 children inside. They are the grandchildren of Queen Victoria. They played together. At that moment, a grown-up came in and saw them. Everyone said "Oh no! Trouble!" The royal grandchildren were sent to bed. A policeman came to take the others away. They were taken to a police station. The next day, an important man came to see the children. He took them to Buckingham Place. At there, Gram was having tea with Queen Victoria. They said "Gram! What are you dong in our adventure!?" "I'm having an adventure of my own" She said. Queen Victoria looked at them and smiled. "Your grandmother has told me that you are good children. You can play with my grandchildren and stay to tea" she said. They were pleased and enjoyed. After all, the magic took them home.

I really envy them. I want to London too. I think, it is more difficult to enter Queen's house, but it is an adventure!! I want the magic take me some places where I want to go. I was exciting while I was reading this book.


Hunt, Roderick.(1990) Victorian Adventure. England: Oxford University.

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BR 2-03: Kipper and the Giant

Next, I am going to write one of three books, "Kipper and the Giant"

He likes TV program called "The Angry Giant" The program's story is that, The angree giant lived in a castle near a village. Nobody in the village like the giant. He was always cross. When he was cross he stamped his feet and the house shook. Then, Kipper went to find Chip but he was out. He picked up the magic key and it began to glow. The magic took him inside the magic house. The magic took him to the gate of the giant's castle. He come to the village, but it was tiny. He was a giant. "Go away!!" yelled the people. The people threw things at Kipper. Kipper shouted "Stop it! I am not a giant! I'm a boy!!!" however, the people said "Well, you look like a giant" Kipper began to cry. Then, the people say " Giant don't cry. Perhaps he is a little boy but he looks like a giant to us. Perhaps he can help us." Kipper helps the villagers to end their houses. He put back the broken roofs, and he picked up the stone and tok it outside the village. All the people liked Kipper. "Thank you!" they said. Then, the giant come back. He was very angry when he saw Kipper in the village. "I am the giant!" he shout. he ran towards the village. Crash!!! He fell over the stone. kipper helped him, and said "Be a good giant, Stop being angry and the people will like you." So, the giant stopped being angry. He said "I'll try to be good!" After all the magic took Kipper home.

What a nice book is this!!!!! At first, I felt sorry for crying Kipper. He is bravery and so kind to the people who live in the village and a giant. He is a little boy! I think, he grow up bravely. I want magic key, because I have a lot of places where I want to visit.


Hunt, Roderick. (1987) Kipper and the Giant. England: Oxford University.

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BR 2-02: A Rat for House

Today, I am going to write about 3 books. At first, I'm going to write about the book "A Rat for House"

I introduce this story.Everyone loved Mouse and Jojo's new hamster, Junbo. They thought he was sweet and funny, but Mouse was not very keen on him. So, Mouse wants another pet. he thinks that there are two of us, so we should have two pets. Then, they went to ask their mum. The next day, Mr.Macdonald took Mouse to the pet shop. They looked at fish, birds, gerbils, guinea pigs and chinchillas. After they looked a lot of pes, Mouse found a rat, and he said "This is what I want!" The shopkeeper said that rats made very good pets. His dad say, "But this is a rat..." however, he wanted the rat so much, so they got the rat. Mouse called his rat Ricky. He had to be very brave, because sometimes Ricky opened his mouse and puthis teeth round his finger. Mouse and rat are thick as thieves. One day, when the friends were watching TV, Ricky took Ben's biscuit. Without thinking, Ben made a grab for him. The rat spun round and sank his teeth into Ben's finger. They said "Ricky has bitten ben!!! you will have to take him back pet shop!!!" Mouse was angry, and said "It was not Ricky's fault!!!" and Ben agree, "Mouse is right, I shouldn't have tried to pick Ricky up" after all, no one forgot agin. Everyone is scared of Ricky.

I hate rats very much!!!! I really don't want a rat!!! I can't understand Mouse. I think, it is just a rat!!! Do you want a rat? I hate hamster too. I think, hamster is a rat too. After I read this book, I hate a rat more. I like cats and dogs!!!

How about you everyone?


Alexander, Jenny.(2001) A Rat for House. England: Design for Education.

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My plane for this weekend

I'm going to write about my plan for this weekend. Today, I will go to karaoke with my boy friend Tatsuya at night. I have a discount ticket. I look forward to it very much.

Tomorrow, my sister will come back Kumamoto afternoon, so I will go to meet my sister at Kumamoto station.

On Sunday, I have a part time job. I work at convenience store. I have worked there for 7 months. I'm going to work at 9am to 17pm. I don't want to have a part time job, but I need a lot of money. I pay for parking area every month, I want to go shopping, I want to go karaoke, and so on. I will hold out!!!

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Draft essay 2-01a: my special favorite places

I have 5 favorite places in Kumamoto. Today, I am going to write abut my 5 favorite places.

At first, one of my favorite places is Hanaoka mountain. Have you been there everyone? I have been there many times. At there, we can see so beautiful night view, stars, and moon if it is not cloudy. I like them very much. I think, some people likes lively night and some people like quiet night. I like both, but I like quiet night more than lively night. Hanaoka mountain is just right for me.

Next, I have loved my grad father’s house since I was a child. His house is in Ueki. There are a lot of trees, beautiful stream and blue sky. It is just a country, of course there are no stores, but it made me become composed. I like nature so much.

However, I like down town too. At Christmas, there are many shiny illuminations, and it is glitter street. It made me feel “Today is Christmas!!” I like winter down town more than other seasons.

Next, I like festivals. We have a lot of festivals every summer, and we can see beautiful fireworks. I am always impressed by fire works. Do you eat kakigori at festivals? I always eat it at festivals, because I like eating it while walking around festivals. I don't like bustling, but it is no problem just festivals.

At last, I'm going to write about my special favorite place. At New Year Day, I always go to see sunrise with my boy friend. We can't sleep a lot, because we must go there early morning. If we don't go there early, we can't see sunrise. Sunrise is so beautiful and romantic! Our favorite place where we always go to see sunrise is in Kikuka. It is local and local people only know there!

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What should we improve of KGU

Good evening Mr.Waterman! I’m sorry to late. At this project, my group members are Hikaru and Shoko. I do the project with them at first time, so I am glad!!!

We decided topics. At first, we want more elevators at building 4 and building 11. There are only one each buildings, but a lot of student attend classes at there. We always can’t use it because if we use it, we late for classes to wait our turn.

Next, we want parking area for students. I come to school by my car, but there is not parking area. I rent parking space and pay 8000 yen every month. We think, a lot of students come to KGU by car and some students want to come to KGU by car. Why there is not parking area for students?

At last, we want more tables at bakery. We often go to bakery at noon, but there are not enough tables to having lunch everyone who wants to eat at there.

This is our topics.

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Favorite Place(s): outline

Hanaoka mountain 　
　　beautiful night view
　　a quiet night
　　stars
　　moon

My grandfather's house
　　a lot of trees
　　beautiful stream
　　blue sky

Downtown
　　glitter street
　　Christmas


festival
　　fire works
　　kakigori
　　bustling

sunrise
　　New Year's day
　　early morning